Today you will
- show your VET sketch to a partner and get feedback
- make one change and save a new version of your sketch, called v2
- say your VET idea in one sentence
No sketch yet? Draw a quick one on paper. Upload a photo of it to {{code:sm2}} as {{code:sm2_vet_sketch_v1}}.
What is your topic, who is your audience, and what one thing should they remember?
Good feedback has three lines.
- Works: one thing that already helps the examiner.
- Change: one clear fix, using a design word.
- Question: one thing you still need to check.
Design words you can use are contrast, repetition, alignment, proximity, purpose, audience and accessibility.
Example: Jamie's phone-case pitch
- Works: The purpose is clear in one line.
- Change: The middle sections all look the same, so nothing leads the eye.
- Question: Will the text be readable from the back of the room?
You will make a notes file, then swap sketches with a partner. Follow the steps in the box below.
Copy these six lines into your notes file.
Name and project title:
Partner name:
Works: The purpose is clear because…
Change: Proximity / contrast / audience would improve if…
Question: Will the examiner understand…?
My decision after feedback: I will change… / I will keep… because…
When your partner gives you feedback, type what they say under each line.
Common issues
- I can't find my sketch. Look in {{code:sm2}}. If it's only on paper, take a photo and upload it now.
- My partner only says "it looks grand". Ask them, "What is one thing you would change for the examiner?"
- I disagree with the feedback. That's fine. Keep what you can explain, but change at least one thing.
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