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Project Checkpoint: Draft Complete

Students bring their Student Project draft to a state another person can follow on their own, and list the jobs still to do before referencing and packaging. A partner reads the draft cold to check that it gets their message across.

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    1 - Start ~4 mins

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    Key point

    You already have a draft of your Student Project. Today you have two jobs. First, get the draft to a point where someone else could follow it without you explaining it. Then write a short list of what is still left to do before referencing (listing where your material came from) and packaging (getting the finished project ready to hand in).

    Note

    You are not finishing the whole project today.

    2 - Examine and Discuss ~6 mins

    A showable draft is one that is ready to show to someone else. It does not have to be perfect, but someone else should be able to open it, follow it and say what it is about without you explaining.

    Here are four starting points for judging whether a draft is showable. Think about which ones already fit your project. If you want to change the wording or add a point of your own, tell your teacher, who will write it on the board for the whole class to use.

    Is it showable?
    • The main idea is clear right at the start (the opening slide, first paragraph, first screen or first clip).
    • The project has a beginning, a middle and an end, even if some parts still need tidying.
    • Anything you borrowed from someone else is at least listed somewhere, so nothing important gets forgotten later.
    • You could hand the file to a partner and stay quiet while they look at it.
    Two openings of the same project side by side. Not showable yet: a slide that says only My project, with an empty picture box and the words Click to add text, so a stranger has to ask what it is about and who it is for. Showable: a slide headed Check it before you share it, a four-post guide for first years on checking a claim you see online, so a stranger can say the topic and who it is for with no help.
    Note

    You do not need final references, packaging or your presentation yet, because those come later.

    3 - Hands-on: Get Your Draft Showable ~14 mins

    Work on your own project. By the end of this step, you need a draft a partner can follow and a list of jobs to do.

    Key point

    The least you need today is a clear opening that names your topic, a rough beginning, middle and end, and a list of anything you borrowed.

    1. Open your draft, which is saved the class way, where your class keeps its work. Your research log (the notes you made while researching) is in Your project so far above. If your draft is missing, ask your teacher to help you get it back.
    2. Check your draft against the points the class agreed, and fix the biggest gap first, such as an unclear opening.
    3. Add anything a stranger would need, such as a title, a caption or a sentence joining two parts.
    4. When your teacher calls time, about nine minutes in, stop building, even if your draft is not finished.
    5. Copy the three headings below to the end of your checkpoint notes in Enter Your Work under this step, and write the jobs you still have to do under each. This is your remaining-tasks list, so press Save. Write clear jobs, such as "add credit for the Pixabay clip on screen 3" rather than "tidy references".
    6. Leave your draft and list open for the next step.
    Your three headings

    Still to build or fix: parts of your draft that are missing or not working yet.

    Still to credit or check: things you borrowed that still need a credit, or anything else you need to check.

    Before referencing and packaging I still need: any other job you must finish before you can start referencing and packaging. Your project also needs a reflection, which you will write when you package it. If you have noticed anything about staying safe online, or about the good and bad sides of being online, note it here.

    4 - Partner Cold Read ~10 mins

    Swap drafts with your partner for a cold read. This means your partner looks at your draft with no help from you, to test whether it makes sense.

    Timer

    You each get about 4 minutes. Partner A reads first, and you swap roles when your teacher says so.

    1. Hand over your draft without explaining it.
    2. For video or audio, only watch or listen to the first 60 to 90 seconds.
    3. If you are the reader, look quietly first. Then tell your partner what you think the project is about, what point it is making and who it seems to be for.
    4. If you are the maker, listen without arguing, then note on your remaining-tasks list whether their answer matched what you meant.
    5. Then write one question for yourself about where they got lost or guessed wrong, so you know what to fix.
    6. Repeat with roles swapped, then press Save on your remaining-tasks list.
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