You already know when a character on screen sounds like themselves. Change three words and they stop ringing true. Today you write as one film character: a short piece in their voice, plus one sentence on the craft choices you made. That piece goes into your Communication Portfolio.
Pick a film character you know well from work in this unit, or another film you have watched. Think of voices you can still hear: a deadpan hero who never quite says what they mean, or a frantic best friend who talks in rushes. If the film title is fuzzy, start from a moment you know, such as the walk home after a door closes, or waiting for a reply that never comes. If you still need a prompt, ask your teacher.
Character voice is not an accent on the page. It is vocabulary, sentence rhythm, and the things this person would never say.
| Term | What it means for you | Real example |
|---|---|---|
| Character voice: the way a person sounds on the page through word choice and what they leave out | Your piece should sound like them, not like an essay about them | A mate who never says sorry, only "yeah well" |
| Monologue: one character speaking or writing alone | Diary, monologue, or long caption all count if the voice holds | Talking yourself into leaving a party |
| Rhythm: the beat of short and long sentences, stops, and repeats | Match how they actually talk, not how neat writing sounds | Three short texts, then one long voice note |
Here is the same move in one sentence: "Grand," he said, the way people say grand when they mean the opposite. The word is ordinary. The second half of the sentence is the character. That is the move you will use.
Read the monologue below. Hunt the craft moves: short lines, self-corrections, concrete details, and what the speaker will not admit. Just notice what the voice is doing; you are not writing a full analysis here. Steal two moves for your own character piece in the next step. Nothing from this step goes in your Communication Portfolio.
Now write as your film character, in the activity below. It has the brief, and it saves your work as you go.
When you are done, press Copy for my portfolio and paste your piece into your Communication Portfolio as m3_l87_character_voice_AB, using your own initials in place of AB. Your craft note is the last sentence of the piece.
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